Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Critical Theory in a New Writing Space

Observe: They only put one image, however I felt they could of used more. They used quotes from Bolter. They had a white background with black font. The group did a good job presenting. They really knew there stuff and dissected the chapter well.


Infer: There is no end to the internet. The internet can take you anywhere. The writing spaces have been growing and creating an evolution. Writing is authoritative. They explained how which ever the writing is presented, the reader and writer will still have the same understanding. 


Question:
1. What connection should the reader have with the writer?
2. Do you think writing has reached a peak or is it going to keep increasing?
3. Why is writing so important?
4. Why did your group only use one picture?
5. Which has more power, the writer or the reader?

Sunday, May 1, 2011

Refashioned Dialogues

Observation: Compares writing to music as a structure. Music is similar to text because both can be shown through visual notes. Uses a picture of two paths. A reader chooses her path through the book by being able to peak in the back of the book. Media lets you choose your path. They showed a comparison between printed text and digital text.


Infer: The reader has an advantage when reading.The group focuses on writing does not need to have a specific structure. Writing is now made to suit a person specific structure of writing. In todays world, linear method is obsolete in writing. Text no longer has limits. Dialogue is continuously improving with technology by being more interacting. In todays world, we have dialogues in Facebook, Twitter, Texting, Email, Print, etc. Before these new dialogues our comments were private and were hard to share. You would put your notes and comments on the empty spaces on the paper. Now with the internet you can easily just comment on the wall of Facebook, Blogs, Journals easily. The writer cannot only be the one to see it but the world is also an audience too. 


Questions: 
1. If we get to choose any path we want, want happens if we go the wrong way?
2. Why don't you think we should have a guide? 
3. Aren't there too many paths in the world now that technology has been born? 
4. Do we create all these different types of writing because we get bored with all the other ones?
5. Why do you think we are going back to visuals when in the early centuries they changed to print?
6. Do you think we should of just stayed with out linear method of writing?
7. Why does Bolter compare writing to music?

Friday, April 29, 2011

Reflection

    Working on this prezi with 2 other students made it a lot easier. I felt like if i didn't have them, the prezi would have been as great as it was. Luckily it was easy for all 3 of us to meet. We decided to meet for 2 days at the library. All 3 of us went over each section in the chapter and discussed each point we would use in the prezi. We would all agree on each point.
     We then discussed what pattern of presenting we were going to use. We decided for us to pick two quotes from 3 sections out of 9 sections in the book. We each chose visuals for each point we were going to use. Without those visuals it would of been a lot harder for the audience to understand our chapter. We achieved getting our message across to the audience.
     If a activity was added to the presentation it could of been strengthened. Maybe if we showed visuals of store logos and have the audience tell us what they were (ex. Mcdonalds, Nike, Abercrombie). The presentation was suppose to be 30 minutes and we did 20 minutes. I felt we went too fast presenting. If we would of went a little slower we could of gave a more better understanding to the audience. I wanted to answer all the questions that were asked on everyones blogs.
     Overall, we did a great job!

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Breakout of the Visual

Modern society has the great opportunity to communicate in a vast array of media and are no longer limited to writing. With the advent of computers, the Internet, and digital print, we have expanded our realm of communication and made it more enriching. With the new advancements in technology, the art of communication is evolving. It is clear that the art of writing is changing, but is it changing for the better? With the use of technology we are able to combine the use of text and images and have created a harmonious marriage that has revolutionized the way we communicate today. Images seem to dominate our written realm and instead of show concern, we should embrace this change and bask in the beauty of our developments. 
One evident change that has occurred in the way we are writing is a shift towards the visual arts. While words themselves have meaning, and can be considered an art form, today’s society has focused on combining words with images. Graphics have become an important part of communication, so much so that students can now choose to major in graphic design. Our newspapers, magazines, webpages and digital media all incorporate images with words. As stated by Bolter “hypertext seldom exists as pure text without any graphics” (47). We have evolved to be more visual. 
Does this mean visual text is now inferior to graphics? I feel that while we grow to use visual imagery in our writing, there is no need for one to replace the other. Images should not threaten the written word; they should in fact enhance it. That is part of the beauty of today’s society. We are able to communicate better simply because we have more tools to do so. 
A great example of how images, especially video, can be used to enhance or even replace the written word to express a point was our video project in class. I think that the use of images to make my argument was stronger than the use of words could have been. Firstly, because the very root of the eating disorder problem stems from the effect of visual images. Women are using visual ideals to compare themselves with, including images on television, magazines and in the movies. It therefore seemed most appropriate to use visual arguments to demonstrate this issue. Secondly, the true self-inflicted horror of anorexia can only truly be appreciated through visual means. 
However, if I was able to incorporate written words in my video, I believe my argument may have been strengthened. If for example I was able to quote statistics, statements from anorexia patients, and describe in words the horror of anorexia, I believe my documentary on anorexia and the distorted view of beauty would have been strengthened. I believe instead of competing with one another, the different forms of communication should merge and become more powerful in union. 
The art of communication seems to be moving towards becoming as close to reality as possible. We have shifted our attention to videos and images, simply because it is natural for us to understand and perceive our environment through mostly visual means. If our environment is visual in nature, it makes sense that humans can better understand the image than the written word. Similarly, if one was to read a paragraph in a book loaded with imagery, everyone’s view of the scene described will be different. 
Everyone may read descriptions of a landscape containing red roses, a large tree, a fountain, green grass and a blue sky for example, however everyone will imagine a different scene in their minds. With the written word, the element of imagination and personalization is preserved. In image however, this is lost. We are presented with an image and we cannot argue with it or personalize it. 
The individuality of the artist is one advantage of today’s world. With computers, printers, camcorders and access to the Internet at home, each individual can be an artist. In the past, the written word was the only option. Today, according to Jay David Bolter, “the treatment of text as image becomes even more popular and more culturally compelling with the rise of digital media” simply because we are able to easily combine text and image. 
I have always found this to be true when watching a movie after having read the book it was based upon. It is always a challenge to surrender my visual interpretation of the book with that of the director’s. Does this mean that the art of communication is now better because there is no room for interpretation? Does video reign supreme over the written word because it communicates a message more effectively? 
According to Jay David Bolter, “with any technique of writing – on stone or clay, on papyrus or paper, and on the computer screen – the writer may come to regard the mind as a writing space” (13). I agree with Bolter’s statement because words are born in the mind, and then transferred onto different media to convey a message. He discusses the new ways our generation is defining the writing space. 
We have advanced graphics, visuals and animations. Such designs are challenging the way we are accustomed to communicating in a way which is more engaging and exciting. We are now moving on to three dimensional spaces. We are developing technology that experiments with the way we transfer ideas from the three dimensional space of our minds, and this is a reflection of who we are as a society and culture. Communication is a vital component of who we are as a species. Our survival has depended on it. We have seen the evolution of writing and learn how it reflects each society’s individual needs to communicate, while proving that regardless of how we choose to transfer ideas to one another, the importance of communication is always preserved. 
According to Bolter “print today is continuing to remake itself” in order to “represent reality as effectively as digital and other visual technologies” (47). This implies that print is struggling to keep up with its competition. While print is changing, I do not believe it is being taken over. I feel we will always worship the value of the written word. As with the theory of evolution, writing must evolve in order to avoid extinction. 
Writing and images should not be in competition. They should be used instead to compliment one another. As stated by J. Anthony Blair, the advent of the new “print-based technology” allows for this marriage to occur as it “facilitates, supports and intensifies” the preference for print. By printing text and images, the world of communication has now expanded in ways unimaginable before. We should embrace this change. Whether supported visually or not, the ability to argue a claim in more than one way is an advantage. 
Writing has changed immensely, however it is still vital to our society. We have become obsessed with the image. We have improved our world of images through HD, we have enhanced our movie experience with 3-D, however we still rely greatly on the written word. Books are still popular. Libraries are still considered vital resources.  Textbooks are still used in educating the young. Commercials and billboards still contain words. However, books and textbooks are now digitalized, and images greatly dominate television and the Internet. We live in a visual era because we are visual beings. 
While it feels as though we live in a visual era because we see images everywhere, the history of the world shows us that even prior civilizations focused on images, especially to communicate with the illiterate. Images were vital in Ancient Greece and Rome, medieval Europe, and the Renaissance. However, images for pleasure are different than images used for communicating. The use of images has developed to have a more profound meaning. 
Art in the past was primarily used for aesthetic purposes. We now take this pleasure of imagery, and use it to improve the way we communicate. This remediation of print is expanding the use of images and is enhancing the role images have in our lives. If we can use something to improve the way we share ideas, communicate and transfer information, we should not be weary of embracing it. Had past civilizations had the awesome opportunity to use the technology we have today to combine images with the written word, I am sure they would take advantage of the opportunity. 
Most forms of art are meant to be appreciated aesthetically. Analyzing art comes secondary to feeling its meaning initially. When the use of space and color is arranged together, it is my first instinct to feel the art, and then to understand. I learned this lesson through our crayon project. When the structure of writing is changed and put into such an arrangement, I found myself unable to properly read. I was processing this written essay as though it was a piece of art. While writing is art, and while handwriting can be so different between individuals to be considered art itself, writing does have structural rules. When these rules are broken, the reader is challenged in the process of reading. However with time we have trained our minds to become accustomed to uniting the written word and the image. 
It seems to me when the content of writing is very important, the aesthetics are less important. In the crayon assignment, I found the visual effects distracting. When trying to attract attention and increase the number of viewers, art and images are very useful. Legal documents, research papers, medical records, business proposals, contracts and other important official documents are all written in standard format without many visual effects. These documents have a primary role of expressing important information. Their role stops there. These documents often do not need to attract an audience. Their importance overrides their need to be appealing. Newspapers, magazines, webpages and billboards for example rely on attracting attention. For this reason, the use of visual effects is beneficial. 
Compared to the printing press for example, the computer has also revolutionized communication, but in a different way. The printing press made communication more accessible to the masses and its strength was in mass reproduction. The computer has made communication more accessible to the individual. Communication is now more personalized and more flexible. Computers can store data. We can save documents, use different fonts, images and colors. We can italicize our text, underline words, and alter documents with editing software. We can enhance images, crop them and blow them up. 
While promoting communication and fostering the production of print, the printing press was more revolutionary on a mass level, but not everyone owned a printing press. However, almost everyone owns a computer. For that reason, I think the computer has changed the world of communication more than the printing press did. More importantly, the computer and the Internet have facilitated the marriage between text and image. It was the computer itself that is at the heart of this change in writing, and for this reason must be credited with transforming the written word. 
The evolution of writing is exciting. Finally, we have the tools to combine texts and images to create revolutionary modes of communication. The written word is certainly changing and becoming more enhanced. While images are joining the stage, writing will always be a valuable mode of communication for mankind. The two dimensional world of writing can now take on characteristics of reality with the help of images. The power of words is not diminished, but enhanced with the use of photos. With the ability to create such documents on an individual level, our society lives in an age where we can express creativity, communicate ideas and make our thoughts tangible in ways never imagined before. 

Saturday, April 16, 2011

Electronic Book

Observation: The group went over the history and evolution of the book. The group included a lot of comparisons for the audience to get a better understanding. Luke showed us the kindle to provide us of an example on how the printed book refashioned into the e-book and then grew into a kindle. He then explained how things are more useful to read if they are popular. So the electronic book keeps out unpopular information. Their organization of their presentation showed how well prepared they were.

Infer: Electronic book is a text with images that is digitally produced. The beginning of the presentation brought us back into the days on how it all started with papyrus rolls then grew into Codex. Then they explained how it developed into the printed book and then to an electronic book. Information is easier access than ever before. These ebooks make browsing a "breezy" experience. Information has become more available to the users.

Questions:

1. Do you think electronic books(Ipad, kindle, Ebooks), will seize a printed book?

2. Do you think libraries are going to close down?

3. What's next after the Electronic book?

4. Would remediation of one form to another may ever be complete?

5. Personally what would you choose, a printed book or a electronic book? why?

6. What are the pros and cons of the Ebook?

Hypertext & The Remediation of Print

Observe: The presenters examines the chapter and interprets the concept of hypertext and its influence on writing and reading. Each presenter had a pattern of presenting each section. There were no visuals involved with this presentation, which I felt would of been useful, and I think Bolter would agree too. They left us off with an interesting activity that left us with understanding the concept of "Hypertext & the Remediation of Print."

Infer: Hypertext generates a distinctive network structure that has become a new form of writing and reading.  Hypertext is non-linear. It gives the reader multiple paths to choose from and allows them to move in and out of the original text they're reading from. Bolter explains electronic hypertext is not the end of print, but instead the remediation of print.

Questions:

1. What are the negatives of hypertext?

2. Do you think hypertext improves the reading experience?

3. Do you think there are cons for having "too much" information?

4.  Why did you say "your mind goes blank with too much information"? With all the that information don't you have much more of a variety of choices to pick of what you are learning on the topic?

5.  With all these hyperlinks, how do you know for sure if what you are clicking on contains facts?



Friday, April 1, 2011

Blackout Free Write: Opps!

When i was 12 years old my family and I wentnt on vacation with my cousin MAryellens family.Everyday was a blast , but there was just one thing that wasn't perfect about my vacation: my little cousin Pietro. WIth him came a lot of rule i couldn't say stupid idiot, moron, etc. those were all words he wasn't allowed to hear. However when his mother wasn't around he was the first one to say them. Since it was a habit and i couldn't control those words from coming out of my mouth i used to say it in front of his mother. She used to always yell t me saying how im being a bad influence on her son w. ∑hill i wasn't the only one to say her his sister was saying it too. Another thing that bothered her was when we played around. One time I was talking to his sister about girl stuff and we didn't want her brother around. I told him only girls were allowed, but her kept butting in and then i ended up making him cry. My aunt started flipping out on me. My cousin took me for a walk and not knowing the little boy was hiding in the bushes i kept saying how i hate my little cousin and my aunt. he ran to his mother and it became a whole mess. The relationship between my aunt has changed since that day. I kind of regret it but in another way i don't. She wasn't my mother to control me.

Thursday, March 31, 2011

Thin: A Four Letter Word

Using images to piece together an argument was a very interesting assignment. After deciding on a subject, I found myself wondering what type of images would prove useful in making a point. I decided to discuss the role of the media in distorting young girls’ perception of body image and ideals. With our advanced technology in this modern era, photo-editing software is being used to depict women as unrealistically flawless. After nearly losing a cousin to anorexia, I decided to use images to capture the horrible nature of this disease, its affect on young women and our society’s media contribute to this growing problem. 
The use of images to make my argument is much stronger than the use of words could have been. Firstly, the very root of the eating disorder problem stems from the effect of visual images. Women are using visual ideals to compare themselves with, including images on television, magazines and in the movies. It therefore seemed most appropriate to use visual arguments to demonstrate this issue. Secondly, the true self-inflicted horror of anorexia can only truly be appreciated through visual means. 
In my video, I decided to begin by portraying a happy little girl running free through a field. This was to symbolize the free spirit and uninfluenced mind of a naïve child. The child appears carefree and happy. The next slide begins by showing Barbie dolls. The Barbie dolls are very thin, and dressed in revealing clothes. Following this image of Barbie, I used a photograph of a young Asian girl, in a tight leotard, holding a Barbie doll, and sucking in her abdomen to make herself appear thinner. She is clearly upset from the expression on her face, and she is trying to appear thin just like Barbie. It is also significant that the little girl is of Asian heritage, while Barbie is Caucasian and blonde. While the little girl seems to idolize Barbie, it is for her body image and not her facial beauty in this particular picture. This further points out that even dolls used to entertain young girls contribute to distorting a healthy view of normal body weight. 
The following picture shows a little girl worshipping Barbie, with a look of sadness in her eyes. The images that follow are different examples of additional influences for young girls. The female Disney characters are all very skinny with unrealistic proportions. The cartoon figures that follow are also unrealistically too skinny. Photos of little girls are then presented who are reading magazines and watching television enviously. Young girls are exposed to such media, and their effects on them must be analyzed. One young girl refuses to eat lettuce, even at such a young age. 
Examples of maturing women are soon presented. Now, it is more than cartoons and dolls that contribute to falsifying images of body beauty. Very thin beauty queens and super models are presented, along with a few unhealthy looking celebrities that are beyond underweight. The message coming across to American women (whether intentional or not) is that success, beauty and fame can only be attained if you are thin. The following photo is from a commercial advertising a body suit that promises to make people appear thinner. This further emphasizes our nation’s obsession with physical beauty and body weight. Even though you are not “perfect”, you can make yourself appear so with the help of artificial means. 
The next sets of images are my favorite because they emphasize how the act of distorting beauty in our society is intentional and misleading. I found photos of celebrities before and after their photos were edited. The original photographs have been modified making the celebrity appear much thinner than they actually are. Britney Spears appears muscular and well toned at the pool in a bikini, however appears much leaner and lighter than her natural photograph. Even Queen Latifah, who is one of the few celebrities to have found success despite being overweight, it dramatically reduced on the cover of a magazine to appear lighter than she actually is. 
Subsequent photographs show young girls weighing themselves when they have not even reached puberty yet. Young girls have become more aware of their bodies and their weight, but in a disturbing way. They have an unhealthy obsession with being thin and achieving an unhealthy body weight while struggling to keep up with the ideals imposed on them by the media. A little girl appears weighing herself on a scale in diapers. The subsequent slide uses sarcasm to ridicule the situation. “Does this diaper make me look fat”, it says. Cheerleaders are soon captured staring at a skeleton in envy. A girl hold her mouth shut, with the words “I hate myself for eating” written on them. Her teary eyes capture the sadness and desperation associated with her disease, while her hand over her mouth emphasizes the determination and will they employ to remain so loyal a painful process. 
This disease affects families. A mother tries to speak to her daughter, but her daughter looks away. The next few images show the result of this disease. Young women are shown on the toilet vomiting what little food they gave eaten. While stubborn in her ways, there is a silent cry for help hidden in each girl. The devastating health effects are then portrayed in the slide show with missing teeth due to purging, and the horrible loss of normal body fat. A real photo of a girl before and after anorexia demonstrates the ghastly transformation once anorexia takes hold of a person. The effects are devastating and cannot be described in words. 
In the last few slides, this disorder becomes a disease, which leads to hospitalization and which ultimately leads to death. A cemetery is used at the end of the slide show to represent death, which is then x-rayed. This dramatic effect was used to reflect that once they are dead and buried in the ground, the women have now finally achieved their desire to look as thin as skeletons, because they are skeletons. 
The video I put together has truth value. According to J. Anthony Blair, “an expression has truth value if it can be affirmed or rejected.” I think the images depicted in my video are realistic images that capture the horrific aspects of anorexia. These images speak for themselves because they invoke emotion to make a point. While Blair argues that emotion itself cannot argue a claim, I believe emotion can be used as an argument. 
For example, if an image is depicted as negative (such as that of a young anorexic woman vomiting on the toilet), it is clearly an argument against it. When used in sequence, images have an even more powerful message. For example, I agree that alone, the images of the beautiful supermodels would not make a claim. When subsequent photos present the ill effects of glorifying skinny models as beautiful, it is put into perspective. Just as words alone cannot make a point, but must be used together in a sequence, so too can images be used together in sequence to present a claim and argue for or against it. The photo of the young Asian female sucking in her abdomen while looking fondly at Barbie, for example, does make an argument independently. When looking at the image of a woman whose entire skeleton can be seen through her skin, this is an image that cannot be rejected. The celebrity photos taken before photo editing cannot be rejected. Blair believes this makes visual arguments weak, as they are hard to reject.
According to Blair “the great advantages of visual argument, namely its power and its suggestiveness, are gained at the cost of a loss of clarity and precision”. While it is true that images can be interpreted differently, if properly presented, images can be clear and precise. I do not think a viewer can watch my video and not understand that the message is against the glorification of overly thin females in the media. I think that point was clear and precise. While the author/artist/illustrator of the visual image must rely more on hope that the viewer understands the message, while the written word guarantees a point is come across, I believe the image can present a claim and support it clearly with an added effect of dramatization, passion and emotion. This however, can only be done when the images are presented in a cohesive and organized fashion. 
Unfortunately, there were several projects classmates presented whose claims I could not decipher. While the images spoke out to me individually, I could not piece them together as I would a written essay to understand the meaning. However I do not think this is due to a disadvantage of the image as a communicative means. I think it was the author’s mistake. If a written argument is not presented well, it will not make sense. Similarly, when images are displayed in a particular way, they can confuse the viewer. 
Instead of comparing the two means of communicating and debating over which one is superior, I believe the most strength added to a claim occurs when combining both visual and written arguments. Using both, the power of an argument becomes explosive. They should not be in competition; they should be used to compliment one another. As stated by J. Anthony Blair, the advent of the new “print-based technology” allows for this marriage to occur as it “facilitates, supports and intensifies” the preference for print. By printing both text and images, the world of communication has now expanded in ways unimaginable before. Instead of rejecting this change, it should be embraced. Whether supported visually or not, the ability to argue a claim in more than one way is an advantage. 
The claim made by my visual production I believe was strong. My images were successful at conveying my message. My claim is that modern media negatively affects young girls and that they convey false images of the ideal feminine body, which contributes to eating disorders. My claim was supported using images of young women exposed to the media including magazines and television and becoming upset at how their bodies looked in comparison. It exposed all the false images associated with body image found in the media today such as edited photos and anorexic looking celebrities whose bodies are glorified. It captured the 
In “New Media Age”, Blair discusses the transition of communication from written to visual and the effect it has had on the way we communicate ideas and make claims. The “new dominance of the image” further supports my claim that images portrayed in the media have serious impacts on the lives of young women. As our society focuses our attention on visual stimulation, we will focus more on visual appearances. 
I think my images were very effective in supporting my claim. The only way to make my claim stronger would be to perhaps include some writing along with my images. For example, there were a few words in several pictures that did emphasize certain points the image would not present without the words. For example, following the picture of a little girl in diapers on a scale, the next image was “do these diapers make me look fat?” While seeing a little girl in diapers concerned with weight is a striking image, the mocking power of the statement that follows makes the image even more powerful by delivering the message more directly. The words added humor and irony to a photo that simply provided astonishment. However, I do think in the end, the outrageous photo was able to convey the message across well enough without the support of text. 
Images can have the property of being predictable. Many images invoke obvious and universal responses. For example, images of war are terrible regardless of whom the viewer is. The response to such atrocities of war is therefore predictable. Such images do not require verbal or textual support to evoke a response, as they possess such a strong message, it is conveyed with the power of the image alone. My visual production was predictable in several ways. The effect of emaciated women is predictably negative. The graphic nature of some of the images may not have been as predictable, however the reaction they would stir is. By using graphic images I hoped to relay the message that the media is making women have such hatred for themselves, that they willingly sacrifice everything – even their lives – and suffer in order to reduce their weight. The graphic nature of the images supports the expressiveness of my production. It is one thing to verbally state that young girls idolize Barbie, and another to look into the eyes of a desperate little girl trying to flatten her belly like Barbie. It is one thing to state that women starve themselves to death, and another to see the vivid transformation of a normal young woman to an anorexic skeleton. 
The idea that images are only able to argue a claim if they are organized is supported by Gunther Kress who claims the “organization of writing” is governed by “the logic of time”, while the image is governed by “space”. Writing he claims, must present arguments in a specific sequence to make sense. He argues that images on the other hand, are more arbitrary because they are governed by space. An image and its mirror image will likely offer the same argument and make sense, which will not be true in a sentence. On the contrary however, I find that time and space overlap in written and visual arguments. My argument began with the portrayal of a young vibrant girl, girls who were then exposed to the media full of skinny women, women who then stopped eating and started vomiting their food, and women who ultimately died. There is a sequence to my photomontage, which, admittedly, would have been lost in a single photo. However by keeping my images in sequence and by presenting them in a specific order, I did preserve the message I was trying to convey. This is a principle Kress attributes solely to writing, which I find can also occur with the presentation of images. 
Kress continues to discuss the difference between the written word and the expressed image in making a claim. He discusses the arbitrary nature of art and space. In space, the objects that will be depicted do not have to follow the rigid order of the written word. This freedom found in the logic of space also gives art the possibility of interpretation. Once interpretation is needed, the meaning of something can change. If an artist’s image must be interpreted by a viewer, its meaning will change with each viewer and there is no guarantee that the viewer’s interpretation is the one the artist meant to convey. While this may seem like a weakness of the visual argument, I think even the written word can be interpreted. Literature, and poetry in particular, is often analyzed and interpreted. 
Blair brings up the way students are encouraged to discuss something “in their own words”. This shows how interpretation, expression and communication in the English language can be found in both text and image. Individuals can get creative and flexible with order, sequence, space and time, and still manage to communicate messages to one another. Whether governed by the logic of space, or the logic of time, arguments governed by any logic at all, are likely to be successful. 
The success of the image in making and supporting a claim is evident in the work done by my peers. The visual productions I viewed that were created by my peers were not all successful. I found many visual presentations to consist of different images presented in what seemed to be a random order.  I can determine what I think each person was trying to convey through images. The downfall to images as discussed earlier is that there is no way to truly confirm that my take on a film was exactly how the creator wanted it understood. I can only assume that the images had the same effect on me as the artist intended. However, some peers had me completely confused about their claim. 
One visual production whose claim was powerfully conveyed was the video “Save”. While the images conveyed war, they were very specific in depicted children at war. I understood that she was commenting on the young children in Uganda who have been forced to adopt violent lifestyles for political reasons. Their lives have been consumed by this violence making ruthless monsters out of the Ugandan youth in addition to creating death and destruction by ruining communities. Her images were very powerful and specific. Most importantly, they were organized in a way, which argued a specific point. The most powerful point that came across was that something should be done for this injustice to children. The message was for people of the world to take a stance and help save these children. 
Pictures can convey powerful messages, just as strong as words can. I agree that pictures should be used as a parallel mode to writing. Ideally, words and images should become allies to compliment one another. Both are modes of communication, and communication is something valued heavily in our society. We should strengthen our communication by combining these two different yet powerful modes and reap the full benefits of our ability to express ourselves. They should be used in conjunction, not in place of one another. Humans use both visual and auditory senses to understand their environment. Why should they be used independently to understand each other?

Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Going Prezi

How does this electronic space refashion its predecessor?  How does it claim to improve on print's ability to make our thoughts visible and to constitute the lines of communication for our society?


Throughout my higher years in school teachers and professors have been using powerpoints to present a lesson. With numerous amounts of slides with tons of bullet points it leaves you bored. Powerpoints kill presentations, while Prezis keep you alive in the class. Prezi helps engage the reader. Instead of going into unnecessary details one sentence can bring out a lot of details. In class on Monday, Dr Lay presented a Prezi on Bolters chapter 1. I think without reading it I got the whole summary on what chapter one was about. With all the cool effect(upside down, twisting, turning, rotating) it grabs the attention from the audience.  In essence, it’s simpler and fancier than powerpoint.



Digital Text is the New Black

Digital text seems to be refashioning print.This invention of digital text has been growing yearly. Started with a fat computer sitting on a desk to a thin laptop sitting on your lap. Instead of waiting to get your paper published it can easily be publish right on a computer screen to the world instead of waiting for someone pass by it at a library or at a nail salon looking through a magazine/newspaper. It's amazing how a computer can hold a whole library. With the digital text you can easily get feedback on what you write from plenty of people. For example, Dr Lay has us write blogs daily for the whole class to see. After posting the blog, she has people comment each post for feedback on what to take out or put in. She also helps bring out our ideas to other students. Personally I read everything through the internet. Even though I may get distracted by going on Facebook or shopping online, it doesn't change the idea of what the person is writing. Maybe I'm just getting distracted because what I'm reading is boring.



Thursday, March 24, 2011

"Like you know"

Watching these two videos, one being just words and the other being him in front of an audience. I preferred watching him visually. Seeing his facial expressions and body movements had me get a greater understanding of what he was talking about. The video of just the words wasn't as good. The effects confused me and I couldn't grasp what he was saying. I found myself look at the effects on the words more than listening to him. Seeing the person visually telling something is a lot more helpful than seeing just words with effects and hearing him.


Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Inkshedding

" We borrow notions from our friends and the blaring organs of commerce, and graft them on to a supple, undifferentiated mist of smart particles."


Our thoughts are a collection of the thoughts which have been gathered from different sources. We borrow ideas from friends, from commercials, advertisements and from social media.
After collecting ideas and being inspired by others, we then take these ideas and make them our own after adding our personal touch. We edit these ideas and add them to a larger, richer collection of ideas, which as a whole seems undifferentiated and not specific, but which can be picked apart, can be broken down into smaller more intelligible ideas waiting to become a new notion.

What a "bitch" that was!

 
            COLLAGE

            In “Collage”, Shelly Jackson discusses how all the words of the English language (or any spoken language for that matter) can be put together like a collage of photographs to create a new and unique definition. She brings up the beauty and the art of language and made me think about something I had never thought about before – that I am the author of all my written and verbal creations. When you think about all the laws and rules of the English language, they restrict your communication and your personal art to speak. In this sense, even improper speech should be proper and improper grammar should be proper because it is an expression of your thoughts. And to follow along with her thoughts, I am thinking of a new word to make up…which is harder than I thought it would be. Its probably all those language laws getting in the way of my creativity.

            REALITY FICTION

            Shelly Jackson’s analysis of reality fiction made me think about reality television. Is it really reality? I think its more like reality fiction, because when people know they are being taped, they are behaving in ways other than how they may if they were not being taped. She claims that many times fiction competes with reality, and that many times, reality wins when it should not. Many use fiction to escape reality, and sometimes fiction (because it is derived from fantasy) can be more pleasurable from reality. To pick at reality and switch it around through fiction, we alter reality through fiction, and make the world a more interesting place. I think that is the core of “reality shows” or reality fiction (a more suitable title I think)… there! I found my new word : Realction.

Monday, March 21, 2011

Sample R

I do not agree with his/her statement, "one cannot take a paragraph and mix and match sentences, but for video montages that sort of creative editing is perfectly acceptable." From my own experience of the Four Letter Word project I found myself putting it in a certain type of order. Even when students were presenting their videos, they were saying what order they put there pictures in. I don't see how you can mix and match pictures presenting the argument. Writing an essay and presenting an argument through video are similar on what process both of them go through. Both of them have a certain flow and pattern. For example in my video THIN, I couldn't take the last slide of a cemetery and put it first. It wouldn't display the argument. I also found the people that really didn't have a problem left me puzzled.

Friday, March 18, 2011

Chapter 1 David Bolter

   “Writing Space” talks about digital media’s rise in popularity and how it displaces the print form. The argument is whether printed or digital text is better for the reader. Writing on the computer can be easier. Instead of taking the walk to a library, you can easily go on the internet to find out about something you need to know. Bolter states "between print and digital forms, the ideas of the book is changing." I do not agree with this statement. The ideas are still being portrayed, however, the only thing thats changing is the way it is presented. People like  the quick source of the internet.  
     These days people can post their thoughts or stories online. Posting things online can help you get what you want in an easier way. Whenever I need information my first resort is Google. Printing did displace handwriting. The printed book became the most valued form of writing. The internet sometimes has the book for free. I think there are a lot of positive affects from digital text. 

Thursday, March 17, 2011

Text Messaging Taking Over


I think text messaging is a big part of our lives because it is something quick, easy and can be fun to do. It is a way to talk to someone without being in an hour long phone conversation. Text messaging is something quick, easy and can be fun to do. It is a way to talk to someone without being in an hour long phone conversation. Although there are good effects on texting there are bad effects that come along with it too. Text messaging becomes very addicting. Kids use it in school which prevents them from learning. There is a loss of communication when it comes to texting. 

Three images in Chel White’s video that moved me…

Cigarettes represent the stress the writer is going through. Cigarettes relieve stress for an individual. You see a bunch of cigarettes laying around, showing that he's been through a lot to figure out some ideas to get on the paper. 
Lightbulb represents the writer getting an idea. Good Ideas are often depicted graphically with a light bulb.
Sandwich represent a break from his writing. I can relate when I write I always taking eating breaks. I especially take breaks when I have no idea what to write about. 

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

THIN



Women are using visual ideals to compare themselves with, including images on television, magazines and in the movies.  With our advanced technology in this modern era, photo-editing software is being used to depict women as unrealistically flawless. I decided to discuss the role of the media in distorting young girls’ perception of body image and ideals.

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

A sentence starts like...

     A sentence starts like a person lost in the woods looking for directions. You go all different ways to finally find the right direction. Once you finally go the right direction you know where you are going but there are still obstacles getting in your way. You have to find something to lay across the river to cross it and you need to find a detour around the poison ivy. Once you finally reach the end, you look back to a summary of what you've been through which makes your conclusion.

Sunday, February 27, 2011

UNANSWERED QUESTIONS FOR BILLY COLLINS

Did you purposely choose to make some of your metaphors ridiculous?
I think Bill Collins deliberately made most of his metaphors ridiculous. He was "trying" to make this new poem better. He was making fun of love poems to prove a point. His point was that love poems are so absurb that people compare love to such nonsense. 


Do you believe your rewrite of this poem was better than the original poem?
I don't think Billy Collins think his poem is better than the originals. He was just rewriting the poem  to poke fun on how absorb the love poem was. I guess he was just trying to give a good laugh to his audience.


What point were you proving in turning the focus of the poem to the speaker himself?
Billy Collins point of the poem was trying to prove that love poems carry a lot of foolish metaphors. His random metaphors were to compare how some other love poems consist of metaphors that are over the extreme. 

Thursday, February 24, 2011

All You Can Eat

Compound:

  • Saltwater feedlot
  • Freshwater runoff
  • Ponytail(164)
  • Sinking shrimpfleet
  • Oldtimer
Playful Combinations: 
  • "Gulf shrimpers, the last cowboys of the sea"(166)
  • "Skinners as cowboys"(165)
  • "Gold rush days"(166)
  • "Dumpster dive"(161)
Neologisms:
  • Marifarm
Recast Words in New Roles:
  • trash...by-catch...juvenile
  • Circus of boats(165)
  • Boats galloped from one fold strike to another
  • They begin devouring one celled algae(164)
  • Jumping about on a bed of hot rice
Puns:
  • As sharp as cocktail sauce
  • Stuck in my craw
Verbs:
  • Galloped
  • Devour
  • Evoked

Moved & Unmoved Sample H

Sample H
Pro:
1. Catchy title
2. Excellent word choice
3. Great background information
4. Taught me a lot about iPods

Cons:
1. Paper is mostly about the Apple Product
2. No character in the paper
3. No opinion on the object
4. Grammatical errors
5. No argument
6. Dull

Don't!

QUESTION 4
Mark each time Lehrers offers a definition. How elaborate is each definition? What does the sequence of these mean in aggregate?
  • Carolyn Weisz is a textbook example of a high delayer.(P 49)
  • “The East Indians would describe the Africans as impulsive hedonists who were always living for the moment and never thought about the future,” he says. “The Africans, meanwhile, would say that the East Indians didn’t know how to live and would stuff money in their mattress and never enjoy themselves.”(P 51)
  • There is something deeply contradictory about Walter Mischel—a psychologist who spent decades critiquing the validity of personality tests—inventing the marshmallow task, a simple test with impressive predictive power. (P 52)
  • In adults, this skill is often referred to as metacognition, or thinking about thinking, and it’s what allows people to outsmart their shortcomings. (P 54)
  • In the second, known as the Go/No Go task, subjects are flashed a set of faces with various expressions.(P56)


For a few of the words he used, I had to look around the word for clues on what he meant. He uses a lot of metaphors to help the reader understand what he is talking about. Not too many of the definitions are straightforward. He sometimes is more specific with what he is trying to describe. 


Question 5


Have you found any metaphors in this text?  Did you expect to find metaphors or metaphoric language in a scientific text?

 In his writing, Lehrer uses a lot of metaphors. Sometimes it is to define a word or to have the reader become a part of the study. I was not surprised to find metaphors in his writing. I found his writing to be an outstanding way to present scientific facts. It helps to engage the reader. 

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

The Way I Like It

     My ideal communicative situation would be video. I am a very visual person, and I find that communicating in person is always more effective than communicating through other methods. I like looking people in the eyes when I speak to them, eliciting and analyzing their facial expressions, and listening to their responses. When I watch television or watch a video online, I like the stimulation of multiple senses. I like to hear their voices and see their faces.
     Many businesses or corporations continue to travel to meet international clients to settle deals and present proposals. This face to face contact improves rapport, encourages amicable relations and facilitates communication. Today, some companies hold video conferences to replace such meetings, however the need to visualize your audience (or speaker) is still the key idea. This contact is valuable to a social being like the human.
     If it were up to me, I would communicate through video. It would be faster than other methods, I could easily use my voice to emphasize words or display emotion. My audience would sense sarcasm for example and could sense a change in my tone. Emotion is hard to present on paper. Listening without seeing your object requires more attention. Video should be the prime method of communication, and thanks to today's technology, such a thing may soon be possible.

Friday, February 18, 2011

FREE WRITE

It is 48 degrees today and it doesn't feel like winter. This kind of weather puts a smile on my face. It's the kind of weather where you rather stay inside than outside. It's insane how last month we were off from school because of the snow blizzards and now a month later we are saying how nice and beautiful it is outside. This is the type of weather you can just wear a hoodie.  I can smell Spring coming. Since it's nice out and its a Friday, my friends and I are taking a ride to Little Italy. I'm glad I have a 4 day weekend to relax.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

Questions for Billy Collins

1. Do you think the person who originally made the poem thinks yours is better?
2. Why did you make the metaphors difficult to interpret?
3. Why did you make a love poem into a funny love poem?
4. Do you use a lot of metaphor in your own poems?
5. Do you always criticize other poems and remake them?
6.What makes a good poem for you?

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Materiality of the Essay

  • Heading contains name and date due.
  • Title is the logo for the item
  • Double spaced
  • Times New Roman Font Size 12
  • Small paragraphs
  • 1'' Margins
  • Work Cited page
  • Black font
  • One sided paper
  • 5 1/2 pages long
  • White paper
  • Portrait
     White paper for essays helps the paper look more clear. It helps the black font color I used to stand out. I chose black because throughout my years in school, I've always been told to write in black font. I suppose the black font makes the paper look more serious instead of using color. I used Times New Roman 12 font to generate interest in my subject. I chose my title because  I found the logo to be very catchy. Double spaced papers helps lets your eyes follow the lines better. I used a work cited page cause I did research and used facts from different sources. I usually like writing small paragraphs because it makes the reader want to read the paper more instead of just going on and on in one paragraph about one idea. In this paper, I did everything for the reader. Tried to make it as clear as possible and magnetizing to read. 

Friday, February 11, 2011

Flying With the Kuala's

      In “Flight With the Kuala,” Don Stap uses a lot of descriptive language to draw the reader in. I’m not interested in learning about birds, however the way he wrote made it interesting to learn about. He gives an explanation using imagery which made everything he said easier to comprehend. He uses metaphors to teach the reader about birds and their environment. Scientists are objective when it comes to interpreting their data, which adds meaning and value. His descriptive information added some flair to otherwise methodical and dull material.
He begins by writing “In February, at 37 degrees 12 minutes south latitude, the sun sets late, but night has fallen and the darkness is thick and close. In the hills to the west I see a few dull globes of light from distant houses.” From the beginning, he caught my attention by already placing me in a journey I was ready to begin. The way he interpreted everything had me feeling as if i was a part of his experiment. The writer wants the reader to envision everything as if they see it with there own eyes. While not a lover of birds, I found his writing to be an excellent way of presenting scientific facts to engage the reader. While informative, his work is also entertaining. This balance of science and art blended in beautiful harmony and enticed me "fly" with the Kuala.

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

"We can't control the world, but we can control how we think about it."

     This quote interprets to saying we can't control everything thats happening in the world, but our perspective of life and our aspect of the world can be altered. We have control of the choices that we make; either positive or negative. Our actions are a result of our conscience, which reacts to situations that we can't control. We have the ability to control ourselves, just like the kids who prevented themselves by waiting for the marshmallow. Instead of thinking about eating the marshmallow, the kids could control their minds to avoid the marshmallow. For example they can distract themselves by playing with a toy in the room.

Friday, February 4, 2011

"It Gives You Wings"

      Contemporary American society is known for its fast-paced citizens, innovative industry, modern advancements, and creative energy. Our nation is a leader among nations of the world. We are among the top producers as well as top consumers of a multitude of products. We have excelled in various industries worldwide. Our society is always looking for the newest and best products available to stimulate our insatiable appetite for new achievements and challenge our limits. Our nation dances to the beat of a fast drum. The active lifestyle which characterizes the United States is evident by various products which Americans popularize. Red Bull is a great representation of the energy and power that characterizes our society.
      Red Bull is an energy drink that has become increasingly more popular in the United States. The focus of advertising campaigns looking to promote Red Bull among Americans is on energy and speed. Red Bull claims to increase performance and concentration, boost reaction speed, improve vigilance and stimulate metabolism. Its famous motto is “Red Bull gives you wings”. This is a metaphor for the way you are to feel after drinking Red Bull. Advertisers are claiming that drinking Red Bull gives you the energy to tackle anything and gives you the feeling of having enough energy to fly. Red Bull can outdo any other drink because it can supposedly give you the feeling of having superhuman abilities.
      The name itself is an indication of power. A red bull can represent an angry bull ready to charge. This is a symbolic representation of one’s supreme transformation after drinking this beverage. The target audience for commercials and printed ads are for a wide range of ambitious individuals with an active lifestyle and a demanding schedule. Their audience is very broad and their consumers very diverse, just as the composition of American society. Red Bull ads target the studious night owl and the non-stop party-animal. It is appreciated by the overworked truck driver, the athlete in training, the doctor on call and the pressured journalist.
      To appeal to such a diverse society, Red Bull must offer something which all Americans share – the need for energy to keep up with our hectic schedules, regardless of age, sex, religion, race or ethnic background. The producers of Red Bull are informed about the demanding lifestyle of the average American and anticipate the consumer’s need for drive and focus. Producers assume Americans are over-worked, over-stressed, and under-slept. They assume Americans want a quick fix to their energy problems. While eating well balanced meals, drinking lots of water, exercising and sleeping well can all contribute to a greater sense of well-being, energy and focus, Red Bull producers know Americans are too emerged in the hustle and bustle of their busy lives to allocate time to such activities. To get energy Americans need it quickly, and they need it now. With Red Bull, Americans can bypass the long road to becoming energized, and fly their way to success with the help of Red Bull’s wings instead.

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Pantene Commercial

     In this commercial, Pantene uses a deaf girl's appreciation for music to show that any disability can be overcome with hard effort. Nothing is impossible if you put effort and practice into it. Even difficulties directly between you and your dream can be overcome; even the loss of an entire sense. It goes to show that your imagination can go a long way to help you envision what is possible. Using her imagination, the deaf girl felt the music, which led her to accomplish her dream.
     Out of the 3 stages of metamorphosis, the butterfly is the one that is the most beautiful. The butterfly symbolizes transformation and freedom. At the end of the commercial, I discovered it was a commercial for Pantene. It took me by surprise when I realized that the whole commercial related to a shampoo product. The only reasonable purpose of the butterfly I could think of was that it served as a metaphor. The butterfly's beautiful transformation reflects the way hair can transform into beauty with the use of Pantene.
     The image of the butterfly was one of numerous scenes of nature portrayed in the commercial. The girl was often shown in an empty field surrounded by trees when she played the violin. This seemed to be a way of conveying her state of mind while playing music. She was alone and totally calm, safe and secluded in her sanctuary. Her music had become a place where she could retreat to, a place where no one bullied or mistreated her. Her music is a place where there was no one to judge her for being different. This sanctuary was also transformed from her imagination to reality when the stage became her natural playing field. On stage she can be alone and transform into a proud object of beauty to be admired by many rather than a shameful object isolated and hidden from the world, much like a butterfly.

Saturday, January 29, 2011

Materialities of Writing

     As I prepared my assignment while writing with a crayon, I felt it was physically very difficult to do so. The last time I had used a crayon was years ago, and when I had used one, it was not for writing. I felt the friction of the thick crayon against the paper with every stroke. Quite frankly, it was distracting and made focusing on the assignment at hand more challenging. While slightly bothersome, this interesting assignment did have one advantage. The only beneficial effect the crayons had was making my essay more colorful and engaging. While more aesthetically pleasing, my handwriting was atrocious. I did not find that using a crayon to express my thoughts made me think any differently. My creative energy was no more elicited than when I use a standard pen or pencil. Writing with a crayon was tedious and tiring and it prevented me from wanting to write more. When writing, your thoughts come alive onto paper. This transfer of ideas must occur in the most simple of ways to facilitate this process. If the physical process is made more difficult, it interrupts the instinctive nature of writing. The writing process becomes more deliberate and and the thought process is slowed down. I felt I was thinking too fast to properly record my thoughts. This made me repeat my thoughts over and over in my head. I became frustrated and allowed this negative emotion to interfere with my subsequent thought process. You should not have to think about the actual process of writing when you are writing. You should focus only on your content and let your ideas flow straight onto the writing medium. 
      A culture with only crayons as writing implements would become accustomed to using them for the purpose of writing. It is likely that this culture would not be as frustrated as I am when using a crayon to write. Their writing would also be more colorful than ours is. They would not be able to erase their mistakes. In order to correct their mistakes, they would either have to start over or cross it out. They would have to work more carefully on there work.
   Writing with a crayon made me feel like I was reverting to an older time, even though I grew up in a generation of modern technology. It brought me back to thoughts of when I was in kindergarten doing assignments in crayon. While reverting to a state of childhood may be comforting in many instances, I felt that reverting to a state of childhood while writing a college assignment was counter-productive.
I prefer writing with pen or on a computer, rather than with a crayon. Observing the posters around the room, I noticed that depending on the colors people chose, some stood out more. Posters with bright colors brought on positive feelings. In addition to focusing on writing correctly, I also had to focus on writing properly with a crayon. In the end, crayons offered no benefit over a pen or pencil. This is not surprising given the fact that they were not created for the purpose to begin with.