Thursday, February 24, 2011

Moved & Unmoved Sample H

Sample H
Pro:
1. Catchy title
2. Excellent word choice
3. Great background information
4. Taught me a lot about iPods

Cons:
1. Paper is mostly about the Apple Product
2. No character in the paper
3. No opinion on the object
4. Grammatical errors
5. No argument
6. Dull

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